From 09f94e67ee1fa93e4d04948f11e872c52e204035 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: supercolbat Date: Sat, 5 Aug 2023 13:09:42 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Rephrase texts --- src/lib/Hero.svelte | 2 +- src/lib/Nav/Nav.svelte | 7 ++-- src/routes/+page.server.ts | 4 +-- src/routes/contact/+page.svelte | 9 ++--- src/routes/donate/+page.svelte | 2 +- src/routes/instances/instances.ts | 60 ++++++++++++++++--------------- src/routes/legal/+page.svelte | 20 +++++------ 7 files changed, 55 insertions(+), 49 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/lib/Hero.svelte b/src/lib/Hero.svelte index 9285b12..a34cded 100644 --- a/src/lib/Hero.svelte +++ b/src/lib/Hero.svelte @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ Project Segfault

- Open source development and hosted services. + Open-source development and hosted services.

{ const meta = { title: "Home", - description: "Open source development and hosted services." + description: "Open-source development and hosted services." }; return { announcements: get(announcements), ...meta - } + }; }) satisfies PageServerLoad; diff --git a/src/routes/contact/+page.svelte b/src/routes/contact/+page.svelte index 850a6b1..4b46d12 100644 --- a/src/routes/contact/+page.svelte +++ b/src/routes/contact/+page.svelte @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ We have a Matrix space for general discussion, support and announcements about Project Segfault over at this link#project-segfault:projectsegfau.lt.

@@ -20,7 +20,8 @@

We have an XMPP MUC for general discussion about Project Segfault over at this link#general@conference.projectsegfau.lt.

@@ -44,7 +45,7 @@

Members

- You can contact individual members by using the links provided in the team pageteam page.

diff --git a/src/routes/donate/+page.svelte b/src/routes/donate/+page.svelte index 147c842..2de2949 100644 --- a/src/routes/donate/+page.svelte +++ b/src/routes/donate/+page.svelte @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@

{data.title}

-

What we do with donations

+

What we do with donations?

These donations primarily help us pay for our VPSes, domain names and other diff --git a/src/routes/instances/instances.ts b/src/routes/instances/instances.ts index a0d12fe..5e67c0e 100644 --- a/src/routes/instances/instances.ts +++ b/src/routes/instances/instances.ts @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ data: [ { name: "Invidious", - description: "A frontend for YouTube.", + description: "A front-end for YouTube.", eu: "https://invidious.projectsegfau.lt/", short_eu: "https://i.psf.lt/", us: "https://inv.us.projectsegfau.lt/", @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "Piped", - description: "Another frontend for YouTube.", + description: "Another front-end for YouTube.", eu: "https://piped.projectsegfau.lt/", short_eu: "https://pi.psf.lt/", us: "https://piped.us.projectsegfau.lt/", @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "Libreddit", - description: "A frontend for Reddit.", + description: "A front-end for Reddit.", geo: "https://libreddit.projectsegfau.lt/", short_geo: "https://lr.psf.lt/", eu: "https://libreddit.eu.projectsegfau.lt/", @@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "Nitter", - description: "A frontend for Twitter.", + description: "A front-end for Twitter.", geo: "https://nitter.projectsegfau.lt/", short_geo: "https://n.psf.lt/", eu: "https://nitter.eu.projectsegfau.lt/", @@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "AnonymousOverflow", - description: "A frontend for StackOverflow.", + description: "A front-end for StackOverflow.", geo: "https://overflow.projectsegfau.lt/", short_geo: "https://o.psf.lt/", eu: "https://overflow.eu.projectsegfau.lt/", @@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "BreezeWiki", - description: "A frontend for Fandom.", + description: "A front-end for Fandom.", geo: "https://bw.projectsegfau.lt/", short_geo: "https://bw.psf.lt/", eu: "https://bw.eu.projectsegfau.lt/", @@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "GotHub", - description: "A frontend for GitHub.", + description: "A front-end for GitHub.", geo: "https://gothub.projectsegfau.lt/", short_geo: "https://gh.psf.lt/", eu: "https://gothub.eu.projectsegfau.lt/", @@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "HyperPipe", - description: "A frontend for YT Music.", + description: "A front-end for YT Music.", geo: "https://hyperpipe.projectsegfau.lt/", short_geo: "https://hp.psf.lt/", eu: "https://hyperpipe.eu.projectsegfau.lt/", @@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "Rimgo", - description: "A frontend for Imgur.", + description: "A front-end for Imgur.", geo: "https://rimgo.projectsegfau.lt/", short_geo: "https://rg.psf.lt/", eu: "https://rimgo.eu.projectsegfau.lt/", @@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "Safetwitch", - description: "A frontend for Twitch.", + description: "A front-end for Twitch.", geo: "https://safetwitch.projectsegfau.lt/", short_geo: "https://tw.psf.lt/", eu: "https://safetwitch.eu.projectsegfau.lt/", @@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "Scribe", - description: "A frontend for Medium.", + description: "A front-end for Medium.", geo: "https://scribe.projectsegfau.lt/", short_geo: "https://sc.psf.lt/", eu: "https://scribe.eu.projectsegfau.lt/", @@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "SimplyTranslate", - description: "A frontend for many translation engines.", + description: "A front-end for many translation engines.", geo: "https://simplytranslate.projectsegfau.lt/", short_geo: "https://tl.psf.lt/", eu: "https://simplytranslate.eu.projectsegfau.lt/", @@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "Teddit", - description: "Another frontend for Reddit.", + description: "Another front-end for Reddit.", geo: "https://teddit.projectsegfau.lt/", short_geo: "https://t.psf.lt/", eu: "https://teddit.eu.projectsegfau.lt/", @@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ short_in: "https://t.in.psf.lt/", tor: "http://teddit.pjsfkvpxlinjamtawaksbnnaqs2fc2mtvmozrzckxh7f3kis6yea25ad.onion", icon: "/icons/teddit.png" - }, + } ] }, { @@ -217,7 +217,8 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ data: [ { name: "Matrix", - description: "An open network for secure, decentralized communication.", + description: + "An open network for secure, decentralized communication.", eu: "https://wiki.projectsegfau.lt/Matrix", short_eu: "https://w.psf.lt/Matrix", icon: "/icons/matrix.svg" @@ -258,7 +259,7 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "SearXNG", - description: "A private meta-search engine.", + description: "A private metasearch engine.", eu: "https://search.projectsegfau.lt/", short_eu: "https://s.psf.lt/", us: "https://search.us.projectsegfau.lt/", @@ -271,7 +272,8 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "Gitea", - description: "A web interface for Git, alternative to GitHub.", + description: + "A web interface for Git. An alternative to GitHub.", eu: "https://git.projectsegfau.lt/", short_eu: "https://git.psf.lt/", tor: "http://git.pjsfkvpxlinjamtawaksbnnaqs2fc2mtvmozrzckxh7f3kis6yea25ad.onion", @@ -280,14 +282,14 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "Hedgedoc", - description: "Collaborative markdown notes.", + description: "Collaborative Markdown notes.", eu: "https://doc.projectsegfau.lt/", short_eu: "https://d.psf.lt/", icon: "/icons/hedgedoc.svg" }, { name: "LibreTranslate", - description: "Free and Open Source Machine Translation API.", + description: "Free and open-source machine translation API.", in: "https://libretranslate.projectsegfau.lt", short_in: "https://lt.psf.lt/", icon: "/icons/libretranslate.png" @@ -301,7 +303,7 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "Kbin", - description: "Federated reddit alternative.", + description: "Federated Reddit alternative.", eu: "https://kbin.projectsegfau.lt/", short_eu: "https://kb.psf.lt/", icon: "/icons/kbin.svg" @@ -317,28 +319,28 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "Jitsi", - description: "An open source video conferencing platform.", + description: "An open-source video conferencing platform.", eu: "https://jitsi.projectsegfau.lt/", short_eu: "https://j.psf.lt/", icon: "/icons/jitsi.svg" }, { name: "Vaultwarden", - description: "An open source password manager.", + description: "An open-source password manager.", eu: "https://pass.projectsegfau.lt/", short_eu: "https://vw.psf.lt/", tor: "http://pass.pjsfkvpxlinjamtawaksbnnaqs2fc2mtvmozrzckxh7f3kis6yea25ad.onion", icon: "/icons/vaultwarden.svg" }, { - name: "Plausible analytics", + name: "Plausible Analytics", description: "Analytics for our website.", eu: "https://analytics.projectsegfau.lt/", icon: "/icons/plausible.png" }, { name: "Healthchecks", - description: "Simple and Effective Cron Job Monitoring.", + description: "Simple and effective cron job monitoring.", eu: "https://healthchecks.projectsegfau.lt/", short_eu: "https://hc.psf.lt/", icon: "/icons/healthchecks.svg" @@ -358,7 +360,8 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ data: [ { name: "Pubnix", - description: "A Unix server open to the public with non-commercial recreational goals.", + description: + "A Unix server open to the public for non-commercial recreational usage.", eu: "https://p.projectsegfau.lt/", short_eu: "https://p.psf.lt/", icon: "/icons/pubnix.png" @@ -371,7 +374,7 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "Cockpit", - description: "WebUI for users to access the pubnix services.", + description: "WebUI for users to access the Pubnix services.", eu: "https://cockpit.p.projectsegfau.lt/", icon: "/icons/cockpit.svg" }, @@ -399,14 +402,15 @@ const instances: Instances[] = [ }, { name: "SimpleLogin", - description: "An open source email alias creator/manager", + description: "An open-source email alias creator/manager", eu: "https://sl.projectsegfau.lt/", short_eu: "https://sl.psf.lt/", icon: "/icons/simplelogin.svg" }, { name: "Dendrite", - description: "Another matrix server, running on Project Segfault's India node!", + description: + "Another Matrix server running on Project Segfault's India node!", eu: "https://w.psf.lt/Matrix#Dendrite", icon: "/icons/matrix.svg" } diff --git a/src/routes/legal/+page.svelte b/src/routes/legal/+page.svelte index 9ea62de..82ad07b 100644 --- a/src/routes/legal/+page.svelte +++ b/src/routes/legal/+page.svelte @@ -24,22 +24,22 @@

What do I do if a user is disturbing me?

- If some user of our services is disturbing you, you should immediately - contact us. You can do that either by emailing usemail - or sending us a message on - the Matrix support channel. If you prefer to keep your report private on Matrix, contact one of our - team members. You can find their info on our team page. + or through our Matrix + support channel. + If you prefer to keep your report private on Matrix, contact one of our team + members directly. You can find their info on our + team page.

How can I trust you?

- We have written a privacy policy, which is accessible through this website! - You can find it here. + We have a privacy policy which outlines how + we collect and handle your data.