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Co-authored-by: flow <flowlnlnln@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Rachel Powers <508861+Ryex@users.noreply.github.com>
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Rachel Powers 2023-05-05 14:07:10 -07:00 committed by GitHub
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7 changed files with 14 additions and 16 deletions

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@ -170,7 +170,6 @@ void JavaListLoadTask::executeTask()
m_job.reset(new JavaCheckerJob("Java detection")); m_job.reset(new JavaCheckerJob("Java detection"));
connect(m_job.get(), &Task::finished, this, &JavaListLoadTask::javaCheckerFinished); connect(m_job.get(), &Task::finished, this, &JavaListLoadTask::javaCheckerFinished);
connect(m_job.get(), &Task::progress, this, &Task::setProgress); connect(m_job.get(), &Task::progress, this, &Task::setProgress);
// stepProgress?
qDebug() << "Probing the following Java paths: "; qDebug() << "Probing the following Java paths: ";
int id = 0; int id = 0;

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@ -247,19 +247,20 @@ void Download::downloadProgress(qint64 bytesReceived, qint64 bytesTotal)
// use milliseconds for speed precision // use milliseconds for speed precision
auto elapsed_ms = std::chrono::duration_cast<std::chrono::milliseconds>(elapsed); auto elapsed_ms = std::chrono::duration_cast<std::chrono::milliseconds>(elapsed);
auto bytes_recived_since = bytesReceived - m_last_progress_bytes; auto bytes_received_since = bytesReceived - m_last_progress_bytes;
auto dl_speed_bps = (double)bytes_recived_since / elapsed_ms.count() * 1000; auto dl_speed_bps = (double)bytes_received_since / elapsed_ms.count() * 1000;
auto remaing_time_s = (bytesTotal - bytesReceived) / dl_speed_bps; auto remaing_time_s = (bytesTotal - bytesReceived) / dl_speed_bps;
// current bytes out of total bytes //: Current amount of bytes downloaded, out of the total amount of bytes in the download
QString dl_progress = tr("%1 / %2").arg(humanReadableFileSize(bytesReceived)).arg(humanReadableFileSize(bytesTotal)); QString dl_progress = tr("%1 / %2").arg(humanReadableFileSize(bytesReceived)).arg(humanReadableFileSize(bytesTotal));
QString dl_speed_str; QString dl_speed_str;
if (elapsed_ms.count() > 0) { if (elapsed_ms.count() > 0) {
// bytes per second //: Download speed, in bytes per second (remaining download time in parenthesis)
dl_speed_str = tr("%1 /s (%2)").arg(humanReadableFileSize(dl_speed_bps)).arg(humanReadableDuration(remaing_time_s)); dl_speed_str = tr("%1 /s (%2)").arg(humanReadableFileSize(dl_speed_bps)).arg(humanReadableDuration(remaing_time_s));
} else { } else {
dl_speed_str = tr("0 b/s"); //: Download speed at 0 bytes per second
dl_speed_str = tr("0 B/s");
} }
setDetails(dl_progress + "\n" + dl_speed_str); setDetails(dl_progress + "\n" + dl_speed_str);

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@ -44,8 +44,8 @@
#include "QObjectPtr.h" #include "QObjectPtr.h"
#include "tasks/Task.h" #include "tasks/Task.h"
static const QStringList s_units_si {"kb", "MB", "GB", "TB"}; static const QStringList s_units_si {"kB", "MB", "GB", "TB"};
static const QStringList s_units_kibi {"kiB", "MiB", "Gib", "TiB"}; static const QStringList s_units_kibi {"KiB", "MiB", "Gib", "TiB"};
inline QString humanReadableFileSize(double bytes, bool use_si = false, int decimal_points = 1) { inline QString humanReadableFileSize(double bytes, bool use_si = false, int decimal_points = 1) {
const QStringList units = use_si ? s_units_si : s_units_kibi; const QStringList units = use_si ? s_units_si : s_units_kibi;

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@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ void ConcurrentTask::addTask(Task::Ptr task)
void ConcurrentTask::executeTask() void ConcurrentTask::executeTask()
{ {
// Start One task, startNext hadels starting the up to the m_total_max_size // Start one task, startNext handles starting the up to the m_total_max_size
// while tracking the number currently being done // while tracking the number currently being done
QMetaObject::invokeMethod(this, &ConcurrentTask::startNext, Qt::QueuedConnection); QMetaObject::invokeMethod(this, &ConcurrentTask::startNext, Qt::QueuedConnection);
} }
@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ void ConcurrentTask::updateState()
setProgress(m_stepProgress, m_stepTotalProgress); setProgress(m_stepProgress, m_stepTotalProgress);
QString status = tr("Please wait..."); QString status = tr("Please wait...");
if (m_queue.size() > 0) { if (m_queue.size() > 0) {
status = tr("Waiting for 1 task to start ..."); status = tr("Waiting for a task to start...");
} else if (m_doing.size() > 0) { } else if (m_doing.size() > 0) {
status = tr("Executing 1 task:"); status = tr("Executing 1 task:");
} else if (m_done.size() > 0) { } else if (m_done.size() > 0) {

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@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ class Task : public QObject, public QRunnable {
void failed(QString reason); void failed(QString reason);
void status(QString status); void status(QString status);
void details(QString details); void details(QString details);
void stepProgress(TaskStepProgress const& task_progress); // void stepProgress(TaskStepProgress const& task_progress);
/** Emitted when the canAbort() status has changed. /** Emitted when the canAbort() status has changed.
*/ */

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@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
#include "ui/widgets/SubTaskProgressBar.h" #include "ui/widgets/SubTaskProgressBar.h"
// map a value in a numaric range of an arbatray type to between 0 and INT_MAX // map a value in a numeric range of an arbitrary type to between 0 and INT_MAX
// for getting the best precision out of the qt progress bar // for getting the best precision out of the qt progress bar
template<typename T, std::enable_if_t<std::is_arithmetic_v<T>, bool> = true> template<typename T, std::enable_if_t<std::is_arithmetic_v<T>, bool> = true>
std::tuple<int, int> map_int_zero_max(T current, T range_max, T range_min) std::tuple<int, int> map_int_zero_max(T current, T range_max, T range_min)

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@ -18,8 +18,6 @@
*/ */
#pragma once #pragma once
#include <qobjectdefs.h>
#include <qwidget.h>
#include <QWidget> #include <QWidget>
#include "QObjectPtr.h" #include "QObjectPtr.h"